Today was kind of crushing.
We thought we were getting to a point where this project was refining and becoming close to an end. However all of today's feedback felt like it was flipping where we were at on it's head and asking us to try so much new stuff.
Feedback:
- font feels like Impact, very condensed and not very attractive.
- the whole things feels a bit clip art like and very cliche.
- maybe try more simple/geometric patterns and forget the historical aspect. Instead of trying to reflect what Cuba WAS, add to the flavour of what it is NOW.
- if you keep the colour scheme that will give it enough consistency without needing the patterns.
- but also it would be good to see potential variations of the colour scheme.
- zebra crossings don't need foot prints to say "walk here" so our design doesn't either.
- try using type as a pattern.
- explore more in terms of the font/type faces.
- could you play with perspective, is it to be read by pedestrians or cars? Could it be altered so that it can be read from both sides of the street? Play with anamorphic type?
- the scale feels really nice - give the class an opportunity to feel the size of the whole thing though - i.e put it in an open space.
This all felt really negative and like we had to try a whole lot more stuff, but we took it on the chin and went downstairs to try and play with perspective using a projector in the corridor on level A.
This was not very successful however:
Projecting it this way didn't really give us the perspective we were looking for, so we flipped it so that it was running long ways and taped it out:
This was more interesting but with such a short fat word and the flat surface of a road we felt like this was taking things too far and our justifications of the way we had it resulted in a better project.
Having the type flat so that the white letters act like a zebra crossing, and facing the cars so that it is readable to them and encourages a slower approach made a lot of sense to us, so we are going to stick with that.
This week I am going to generate some new geometric patterns and colour palettes, whilst Calvin and Joyce think about some new typefaces. We will meet up to try these, discuss them, and prepare the best option for Wednesday as we believe that next week the project should be completed.